I usually just browse this forum because the criticism I see passed around has helped me quite a bit with getting my own projects started, but I decided making an account to post this comic here would be worth it. It's a little over 100 pages long, so I hope I'm not too early in throwing it here.
I feel like it's pretty bad. The story and character logic/reasonings seem to contradict themselves or change for no real reason every other page (sometimes on the same page), and the art is just abysmal for somebody who I think is supposed to be a professional artist or something. He doesn't draw like one in my opinion so idk if that's true or not. It's often hard (for me anyway) to understand what order panels are supposed to be read in, and the artist does this thing where he writes cryptic/edgy messages in a really low opacity in various places in the comic that're really difficult to see unless you take it into an image editor and bump the contrast.
The lore itself seems to immediately falls apart when you question it at all. Just read this about page and I think you'll see what I mean: http://www.starwarriorscomic.com/about/
It basically boils down to (in my understanding) any wish you've ever given up on has contributed to the destruction of the universe because stars are wishes and abandoned wishes become black holes because dark matter, and Starwarriors are supposed to... stop that somehow? I think? It says in the comic they don't actually grant wishes http://www.starwarriorscomic.com/comic/starwarriors-1-page-34/ but then it immediately says they do grant wishes http://www.starwarriorscomic.com/comic/starwarriors-1-page-36/ so I have no idea what their role is actually supposed to be, since we haven't actually seen it yet.
The artist also spoils his own comic constantly. There are characters and places that haven't even shown up in the story properly yet who I already know what they look like and what their names are, and that's not going to improve at all because apparently for all of next month he's going to be posting lore information so people can make their own starwarrior fan characters instead of just letting the comic show us how that works.
I can't tell how old the main character is supposed to be, either. She acts like a very young child when the comic starts, and I assumed she couldn't be mentally older than 9 or 10 (she's a feral fox), but when she gets transformed into a proper furry, her body is that of either a young adult or a teenager. So that's. Weird, I guess. And the only other character we've spent any real time with is a super cliche and boring southern hick stereotype, but with a giant magic sword that just appears.
Also the typos are pretty bad and sometimes the wording is... awkward? Like in a "I don't think this guy speaks English as a first language" sort of way. He's Canadian I think so maybe he actually speaks French mainly? I don't know, sentences like, "It's the wish that human destroyed from us," are pretty ehh. Either way, it shouldn't be hard to find someone to proofread. I'm sure he has English speaking friends.
There's definitely planning going into it, but nothing feels like it's been properly fleshed out at all, and I want to see what you guys think of it. Is this comic bad?
Last Edited By: LamborghiniEggRoll May 30 17 8:12 PM. Edited 1 time