It's been another week. I've truncated your PSA into criticism with very limited changes to the wording. You can rewrite it when you finally have time, but you really need to remember what you write in a review is criticism. If you want it to be informative, positive, or constructive criticism, that's your call, but it needs to be criticism.
Also, having finally subjected myself to the HPV comic, is it really that big a deal they didn't mention the urban myth about lesbians not needing pap smears? They mentioned getting pap smears like a half dozen times and two of those were recommendations. I don't ultimately care, I just thought I'd mention it.