My favourite part is when she points out that it is in fact hair on the previous page.
Reading through as much as I could stomach I really wanted to see redlines on her horrific anatomy (although some of it is from parts of the comic that are apparently being remade or maybe going to be remade). Or a collage of the same-face-below-eyes syndrome almost every character has. If you need/want some help with some of that stuff on the art review (I have no idea if you're an artist), I have a buddy I can probably con into redlining some of the more horrible pages/animu people, or whatever other artistic services. Hit me up if you'd be interested, I'd love to help along the review.