The Hotel is a webcomic made by AbyssKing/PuppetPrince. It's about a robot named Hero (real creative) who got fired for... let's say he grabbed a guy by the neck. Why is he just fired for committing a major crime that can send your ass to jail or worst you ask? I have no clue. He becomes homeless and finds some weird looking chick who also seems to be a robot. They then go to a forest.
So what's the problem with it?
Art: not very good. The first thing you'll notice is it lacks any shading. Another thing is that the anatomy is weird. It also lacks any detail. Just look at this comic and the author's other art peices. They look weird. It basicly looks like the go-to artstyle for any Tumblr user.
Writing: the begining for starters is very rushed. Having no proper intrudition to our main character. Same goes for the female robot-thing. She just appears. We also get no intrudition to the world or setting. Which is kinda a must for every story. It also tries to be edgy. Chase in point, the strip where our "hero" ends a life:
Oh the edge. PS: why didn't anyone tell Hero that he was in a movie? Why didn't he himself figure it out?
Characters: well the story just started, so there's nothing much to talk about.
The creator: Abyssking/Puppetprince is a Tumblr user who is very... intresting... She's an otherkin, wants to be called an it of all things, can't take criticism, says she's has a bunch of mental problams (which is likely false) and is a teenager trying to be edgy. You can learn more from her if you go to her Tumblr blogs and Youtube.
Conclusion: it can get better, but since the author can't take criticism, it's not likely goanna happen.
Other Tumblr: http://possessionexe.tumblr.com/post/155562833022/abyssking-abysskings-commision-info-howdy-so
The comic: http://thehotel-comic.tumblr.com/post/148661033915/cover-image
Last Edited By: waifuman Apr 26 17 3:01 PM. Edited 5 times